any anime ideas that can relate to my title? (PLEASE READ ALL OF THIS)!!?

Question

ok i am writing an anime story called one death angel and it is about a girl named (still looking up names) and she is 15 years old and she is enrolled in highschool. She is a new girl and her parents died long ago, she is living in a foster home and she is completly happy. a few days later a new guy enrolled into highschool and he happens to be in all her classes. He soonly notices that he has a locker right next to her. He soonly falls in love with her and one day very strange things were happening to the (girl).... even though she was a "human fairy" she didn't need wings to complete her being. she was then seeing weird things in the world all around her until she gets an unexpected visitor.... it was one of the fairies from ( still thinking of magical lands) and she said that she was in danger.....


is this story really good so far? its like a distant relationship between a regular human and a human fairy and she discovers that she is part of another world. she was the reincarnation of another angel that died so the evil vampire couldn't get her special bottle that was filled with the power to fulfill his duty to his father that he promised to do for him and that was to do something his father couldn't do.... and if he didn't have acess to the small bottle he would drain the power out of her with his teeth.... so they are transported into another world where they go on a journey to get all the power they need to defeat the guy...


how does my story sound? any new ideas?

thanks!

Answer 1

I really like your story so far...even if I personally like stories which have both main characters humans...but anyway...you could add more characters to the story ...like... an evil vampire teacher (you could make him/her be the one that wanted to get that special bottle, or he/she can be an angel too it is up to you) and as the story goes on, other magical characters to appear (maybe the friends of the main characters). I think if you add a lot of romance in it, it could get really good. So keep up the good work :D and have fun:)

Answer 2

I think you have a very good imagination, and a good idea. Just make sure you focus mainly on the characters, because if your characters are lovable, your book will be too.

Answer 3

hmm.. well i feel that it's a bit too "confusing" the main idea of it is pretty good . but still, maybe u can keep things more simple.



also, i feel that this idea has been used by a LOT of mangaka already. so maybe u can add some more aspects to it that's more unique.